Here’s a polished and professional version of your email to request an admission status update. You can copy and personalize it with your details:

.

Subject: Inquiry Regarding Application Status – [Your Full Name]

Dear [Admissions Officer’s Name],
(If you don’t know the name, you can use “Dear Admissions Office” instead.)

My name is [Your Full Name], and I am writing to kindly follow up on the status of my application for the [Program Name] program for the [Term/Year] intake. I submitted my application on [Date], and my application ID is [Application ID] (if available).

I understand the admissions process takes time, and I truly appreciate all the hard work your team is doing. I’m reaching out just to check if there are any updates available regarding my application, or if there are any additional documents or steps required from my side.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
[Your Full Name]
[Your Email Address]
[Your Phone Number (optional)]

.

.